Does this intro paragraph look okay?

You are telling more than you should be describing. Give me a discription WHY filling and delicious makes an excellent meal? Also you should find some way to combine the last two sentences or make it less wordy. They both are basically saying the same thing and some of what you're saying in them is unecessary. Be sure not to forget your hook. So far I've seen nothing that gets me interested or is explaining something I've never heard before. I can see where you are going though, and you have a good idea. Keep up with description of food, it's a great topic for illustration :)